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Sugar Coated Lies

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You’re a liar and a cheat Just like a dog on heat You lurk behind a cobweb thin disguise and try so hard to fool the guys But I’ve seen the way you try play the field You’ve tried your best to manipulate me Listen up honey, I’m not blind I clearly see But I’ve got used to your patronising ways I won’t take any more of your crap I’m gonna start to answer back! You’re a liar and a cheat Just like a dog on heat You lurk behind a cobweb thin disguise and try so hard to fool the guys But I’ve seen the way you try play the field You tried to treat me like a fool Broke many hearts, broke every rule But sugar you can no longer deceive me I’ve got my eye on you and note everything you do Hope I’ve got that message clearly through to you You’re a liar and a cheat Just like a dog on heat You lurk behind a thin disguise and try so hard to fool the guys But I’ve seen the way you try play the field If you continue on this way and all the petty games you play In time the truth about you is gonna be revealed! 05~10~16

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/6/2016 10:05:00 PM

Well...that's some write, Jan! Powerful stuff. Sometimes we need to vent when people don't play nice. Hugs, dear.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2016 2:37:00 AM

I have no idea where this came from Eileen - usually its humour but this one surprised me but i fancied writing a lyric lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2016 2:29:00 PM

- Woooow .... really powerful !!! - Very well written, Jan ! - What wins the liar with a lie? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2016 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise - my muse has been on overdrive lately mostly humour then woosh this one came out of the blue:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/6/2016 9:29:00 AM

Very true, Jan, no one can hide behind lies for long...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2016 5:18:00 PM

I hate being lied to in real life and in the cyber world-( hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 10/5/2016 8:34:00 PM

Wow! Powerful stuff Jan... Remind me not to mess with you, Ha... You are a very prolific writer... I love the motto behind the three-legged flag of IOM, No matter which way you throw me, I shall stand. Something to that effect. /|\

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2016 2:00:00 AM

Yes the motto is great Rick - the flag caused controversy some years ago at a sporting event - the athletes were made to cover up the emblem as it was thought to resemble the swastika! I am amazed at how much I write as I hated poetry at school now have about 1600 poems since Feb 2014. The poem came out of no where - I just have no control over my muse:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/5/2016 3:44:00 PM

shoo this man out, jan... a powerful write; i just did something like this now, but yours has more grit!...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2016 3:50:00 PM

Thanks Nette - I have no idea where this came from its usually humour she comes up with:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/5/2016 3:43:00 PM

Quite the rant. I think your hubby better hide.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2016 3:48:00 PM

ha ha ha I have no idea where it came from Tim but its written about a woman cheater:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/5/2016 2:34:00 PM

Really enjoyed reading this..Its full of eruptic volcanic steam : )... Oh that dogs on heat put a smile on my face..but in reality its not nice for anyone to play with others emotions..There are both gals and guys who lie and play with others sentiments....and its sad indeed.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2016 2:41:00 PM

Thanks Charma its quite a change for me to write something darker but I have no control over my muse :-) hugs jan xx

Darren White

Date: 10/5/2016 1:52:00 PM

This is powerful Jan! A 7 from me :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2016 1:55:00 PM

It took about 5 mins to write Darren I have no control over my muse - shes been on humourous poems with the parodies of the nursery rhymes ... maybe the tide is turning! lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2016 1:45:00 PM

WOW, I kind of wrote about a liar as well...LOL, however, it's not the same liar you wrote about. I love your fancy way of spreading your words. ((by the way, this is the kind of poetry I love)) lol,just in case you want to use this for any one of my future contest... HUGS and Love a HIGH 7.... LINDA

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2016 1:49:00 PM

I'll defintily use it in future Linda for contest 101 so you have time to forget about it lol - goodness only knows where this came from - I've been writing fun nursery rhyme parodies lately - this took just 5 mins to write:-) hugs Jan xx