Sugar Cane Fields

Sweet sugar cane,
So sweet and juicy
Well, it just makes
Your mouth,
So watery, inside
Harvest bounty from 
The Savannah fields
Sweet sap running
Down their long 
Slender green spines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 17, 2009 at 11:14 PM
Excellent descriptions Gregory...
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