Sugar Beach

...twist of sun squeezing out lemonade fun ~ Sugar Beach castle 5/7/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2018 8:25:00 AM

such a cute haiku for a beach which I really hope has the name of Sugar Beach because that is just plain wonderful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2018 9:35:00 AM

There is a beach in St. Lucia named Sugar Beach. St. Lucia is a beautiful Island with rolling hills!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/8/2018 1:07:00 PM

I can relate to this bright, sunny haiku! (If for contest, doesn't first line have to be 5 syllables?). Now, I have an extreme urge to go to the beach. Seems we (Virginia) skipped Spring, straight on to Summer and my white self is ready! All the best ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/7/2018 8:22:00 PM

I can see it, smell it, and taste the lemonade. I have to ask, "Is there a Sugar Beach?"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2018 8:35:00 PM

St.Lucia has a Sugar Beach :)