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Suffering Inside Myself

Rain falling, pounding on the roof
Trapping me indoors 
Blotting out the sun
Parroting my mood perfectly
I play music but no song is loud enough
To distract from the thoughts in my head,
I can still hear my inner voice
Speaking the truths I try to hide from
The music can’t end the torment I’m putting myself through
Sometimes the lyrics only highlight memories I try not to revisit
What used to be a sojourn from my life, an escape, is fueling my pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/1/2012 11:26:00 AM
C.K, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:47:00 PM
Wish you could just relax and enjoy the rain. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Charmonique. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Chamonique Knowles
Date: 8/30/2012 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 8/16/2012 3:59:00 AM
Chamonique I like, turn the sound way up...David
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Date: 8/15/2012 10:59:00 PM
CHamonique.... this is deep.....love it..:-) Thank you for sharing * Goodnight~ PD
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