Sue

there once was a gal named Sue
her boyfriend loved wearing  suede shoes
they had a big fight one day
and needless to say
Sue threw his suede shoes away
they made up  thereafter
that was a disaster
he tried to get violent with Sue
that was a mistake
his arm she did break
and now the poor guy's black and blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/22/2013 10:45:00 AM
enjoyed this oldie of yours Joseph...
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Date: 11/29/2012 3:03:00 PM
Good one, I see it 's a double limerick!! I shall try seeing more of your "oldies"!!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/29/2012 4:25:00 PM
I shall visit some of ypurs also...especially your sonnets...love
Date: 3/27/2012 4:02:00 PM
Joseph May, what you can say about a girl named Sue. She broke his arm for he caused her harm. Now it's back to school to learn some more charm.
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Date: 3/23/2012 3:47:00 PM
May I say what a witty write.....Joseph take care and have a onderful weekend. Welcome to poetry soup... stop by my poems if you feel up to a brain blossom of wackiness?
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:33:00 AM
Quite fetching and lively, Joseph, as it skips along with an unhampered frisky gait from line to line, and your brand of humour. Good for Sue...she knew just what to do...LOL! This is both serious and hilarious, and it is good to take a lighter look at the vagaries of marriage woes every now and again. Good stuff, Poet! Thank you for sharing and brightening my morn with a most jovial treat. Rascal
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Joseph May
Date: 3/23/2012 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Rascal, yes ,old Sue don't take no stuff enjoyed your poem rain too ... keep it flowing ....Joseph
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