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Suddenly Swans

choleric clouds, suspended over the leaking lake the rebellion of a teenage face cross-eyed, ferocious bereaved by a split pancake baffled by life’s inconsistencies a vortex peeks out of darkness ready to ripple and run her mascara suddenly swans, as the sun vanquishes the storm a rare epiphany twirls in her mind graceful snow wings dapple the outskirts of time playful and daring to proliferate a smile across the freckled face she embraces the curvature of a poet’s neck and spreads her august wings the wild and homeric transformation of an ugly duckling she amazes her friends 4/6/2019 Suddenly Swans Poetry Contest Sponsor - Maureen McGreavy

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Date: 4/8/2019 9:11:00 PM
Beautifully conceived and written. A FAVE for me, Kim. Thanks for writing and posting it. Best wishes, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/9/2019 6:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon!
Date: 4/8/2019 12:43:00 AM
Beautifully done; your imagery is breath-taking, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 4/6/2019 4:20:00 PM
Excellent. The beauty of a swan transforms a life. So well crafted.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2019 7:18:00 AM
Thank you, Allen!

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