Black Eyed Susan Poet Couplet

Suddenly Gone

We were seating our kids at an outdoor cafe
When the tsunami hit and swept them away


Received 5th place in "WHAT YOU WILL" contest
Received 7th place in "featured poem of the week" contest
Received honorable mention in "Tribute to Japan" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 1:11 PM Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2011 at 5:09 PM CONGRATS SUSAN ON YOUR 7TH PLACE WIN WITH THIS FEATURED POETRY LUV..

Kim Merryman September 17, 2011 at 12:41 PM Congrats on your win, Susan. Kim

Kash Poet September 17, 2011 at 11:27 AM Congrats Susan on your win in PD's contest.Enjoyed your poem.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2011 at 8:29 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. Susan

Caryl Ramsdale September 17, 2011 at 3:49 AM A winning congratulations! CR

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2011 at 2:13 AM Susan,..Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA

Jack Horne May 21, 2011 at 12:27 PM Many congrats on your win, Susan : )

Dr Hitendra Mehta May 21, 2011 at 12:44 AM Many Congrats Susan on big coveted HM in Debbie's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2011 at 10:27 PM congrats Susan. I remember this one and it has quite an "impact" on the reader!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 10:26 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will"contest Susan. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A May 19, 2011 at 11:16 PM Susan,. CONGRATULATIONS:-) !! on your wonderful featured poem of this this week. Take care and God bless,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 19, 2011 at 12:43 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Susan. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 19, 2011 at 10:41 AM So much impact in these two lines-- really shows how things can change in a second... way to go for you for being in the winners' list, Susan :)

Dr.Ram Mehta May 19, 2011 at 6:08 AM Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of debbie, Susan

Jack Horne May 19, 2011 at 6:07 AM Many congrats to you : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 19, 2011 at 5:31 AM Congrats Susan on your HM in the Japan contest.. a great entry luv..enjoy ..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 16, 2011 at 5:39 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown May 16, 2011 at 12:57 PM Congratulations on your featured write this week Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 15, 2011 at 6:09 PM Congrats Susan on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..

James Fraser May 13, 2011 at 1:51 PM Many congratulations Susan on your win in Brian's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2011 at 8:39 PM oh, my gosh, what a startling little couplet!! Very powerful effect! congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 11, 2011 at 1:04 PM Congrats Susan on your fabulous win in brian's contest with this fantastic entry luv.. so honored to be sharing this winners list with u ..enjoy..

Robert A. Dufresne May 11, 2011 at 12:39 PM powerfully tragic reality write, Susan. Congrats on your win

Elaine George May 11, 2011 at 11:22 AM the power of nature! Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Susan. Lainie

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