Suddenly a Hush

suddenly a hush the silent disappointment dangling in her pause AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 28, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/31/2021 8:10:00 PM

That middle line had me in suspense, wondering

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/1/2021 4:21:00 AM

hugs xx

John Lawless

Date: 7/29/2021 5:37:00 AM

BRILLIANT!!! Had me dangling in my pause as it filtered through the hush reflection. Nice job Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2021 9:34:00 AM

Thank you very much, John ~

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/29/2021 3:22:00 AM

Silence always has a sound but you have to listen carefully. Haiku magic...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/29/2021 9:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, Delice ~