Sudden Exposure

A sweet young thing from Arkansas Went out one night without her bra Her blouse slipped down Which caused a frown Since she was dancing with her pa.
written March 28, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 5:50 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Hope they weren't dancing on 'Hee - Haw!;
Hankins Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 6:11 PM
All fiction, of course. But, it is funny!
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Hello Milton, this would be embarrassing for the daughter. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Hello Milton I agree not wearing a bra is brazen. It would not be comforting to go without a bra when dancing a fast one. I believer it would hurt. Enjoy your day my friend.
Hankins Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Well, I couldn't decide whether she would be embarrassed or not, since she went to a dance with her father and chose not to wear a bra. That, to me, was pretty brazen in itself.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Hilarious at its innocent best!
Hankins Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 9:09 AM
My Deb wouldn't even go out on the porch without first putting on a bra. Standard procedure for her.
Chies Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:02 PM
lol, while I was reading this poem it became extremely visual, for me
Hankins Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:19 PM
Hmmm...where WAS your mind, Marco. Need I say????
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