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Sudden Exposure

A sweet young thing from Arkansas Went out one night without her bra Her blouse slipped down Which caused a frown Since she was dancing with her pa. written March 28, 2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/29/2022 5:50:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Hope they weren't dancing on 'Hee - Haw!;

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 6:11:00 PM

All fiction, of course. But, it is funny!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2022 10:40:00 AM

Hello Milton, this would be embarrassing for the daughter. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2022 10:25:00 AM

Hello Milton I agree not wearing a bra is brazen. It would not be comforting to go without a bra when dancing a fast one. I believer it would hurt. Enjoy your day my friend.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 11:53:00 AM

Well, I couldn't decide whether she would be embarrassed or not, since she went to a dance with her father and chose not to wear a bra. That, to me, was pretty brazen in itself.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/29/2022 8:50:00 AM

Hilarious at its innocent best!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/29/2022 9:09:00 AM

My Deb wouldn't even go out on the porch without first putting on a bra. Standard procedure for her.

Marco Chies

Date: 3/28/2022 7:02:00 PM

lol, while I was reading this poem it became extremely visual, for me

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/28/2022 7:19:00 PM

Hmmm...where WAS your mind, Marco. Need I say????