Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

Sucker Punched

I can't recall exactly when
Life swung and hit me on my chin
I"m ashamed to say, it knocked me cold
When I came to, I woke up old

While I was out, I had a dream
Of juggling on a balance beam
While jumping hoops, upon one leg
And one wrong move, cost one nest egg

Was it yesterday or the day before
I had it all but wanted more
When days were long and fears were short
Carouse by day, at night cavort

Yesterday, less was more
It must have been the day before
I wish I'd seen life's sucker punch
'cause now my memory's out to lunch


          by Daniel Turner

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Freddie Robinson Jr. March 13, 2018 at 8:57 AM Ah, this was so rib-tickling funny, Daniel. Yet very Yoda wise in it's presentation of life. Fantastic poetry which put a big smile in my heart. An instant classic fave of mine. Aurora bright write. Love and smiles always. Daniel Turner March 18, 2018 at 11:38 AM Hello, Freddie. So nice to see you again. Thank you for the flowers. Hoping you are well and staying out of trouble.

FJ Thomas March 4, 2018 at 7:12 PM Lol Daniel I don't think anyone could have put it any better than you have here and have so many people understand exactly what you're talking about. I really enjoyed this Daniel. FJ Thomas March 5, 2018 at 1:29 PM Lol nor mine dear Daniel Daniel Turner March 4, 2018 at 8:54 PM Thank you, Shadow. Believe it or not, this isn't my first time talking to a shadow of the past. I appreciate your kind remarks and I am glad i made you laugh.

Gary Bateman March 4, 2018 at 11:37 AM Hello Danny, Your wit with this sonnet is truly insatiable. Your humor is truly one-of-a-kind!! I really like the way in which you work up to "my memory's out to lunch." I can certainly identify with what you presented in this wondrous sonnet. Superb Work -- as always!! (I will try to get over your way more often to check out your great poetry -- always a pleasure!! Best Always, Gary Daniel Turner March 4, 2018 at 8:51 PM Thank you Gary. Hey, i totally understand. there simply doesn't seem to be enough hours in a day. You're always a welcome guest and always appreciated.

Carol B. March 4, 2018 at 10:03 AM Great poem, I sure can relate to the sentiment in this piece. We never know what life has in store for us. I am finding a lot of things I never would have imagined happening to my loved ones and myself. A lot not so good which can be very trying. But I am thankful for the good that has happened as well. :) Daniel Turner March 4, 2018 at 8:49 PM Thank you Carol for the friendly visit. Sorry to hear about your run of bad luck. hope things work out well for you and your family. god bless.

Paul Callus March 4, 2018 at 9:48 AM I dig your witty mind, Danny! Aging is serious business, but it also needs to be taken with humour and a pinch of salt. Best regards // paul Daniel Turner March 4, 2018 at 8:48 PM Thank you Paul. I swear, I simply am amazed how fast time flies. It seems like only yesterday I buried my mother but it's been 7 months already. I appreciate you dropping by.

Jerry T Curtis March 4, 2018 at 6:03 AM First of all I love the way you rhyme, second, your subject matter can be easily identified with, by almost everyone throughout their lives at one time or another. And best of all, I don't have to guess what you mean, you are clear and concise and above all entertaining. Good Luck on your next fortune my friend---and yes---there will be another one ! Daniel Turner March 4, 2018 at 8:46 PM Thank you, Jerry. Where does the time go? i hope it made you smile.

Eileen Manassian March 3, 2018 at 4:34 PM :) This is cute...I feel that way sometimes. Life sure can throw a good punch. Loved reading you again, dear. Hugs Daniel Turner March 3, 2018 at 6:58 PM Thank you sweetie. So nice to see you again.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 2, 2018 at 6:32 PM Hello Daniel,I also like your sense of humor. When my birthday comes I get another year older, but i do not feel any different, i feel the same, always have. So have a good evening my friend. Daniel Turner March 3, 2018 at 6:57 PM Thank you, Darlene. i appreciate your kindness and your support

Susan Gentry February 28, 2018 at 11:17 AM Fun read. Rhythm and rhyme excellent. Love your sense of humor. Fav. Daniel Turner March 1, 2018 at 10:02 AM Thank you, Susan. I hope it made you smile:)

CayCay Godwin February 19, 2018 at 11:10 PM So much truth wrapped in excellent humor or sarcasm or both! I love this though I shouldn't for I feel its dark side and relate to it. You used wit as a platform for sincerity and did so with Daniel-talent that I hope is never prematurely turned off. I owe you a long mail, but am so busy tripping over my own life lately, you wouldn't believe all that's come up - or maybe you would. Hope to share soon, did not forget. So good to see your pen busy, may it remain to hot to lay down. Hugs... CayCay Daniel Turner February 22, 2018 at 3:27 PM Hello sweet thing. Nice of you to make a cameo. I hope everything is good at your end of the world. Take care my friend and thank you for the lovely visit:)

Charlie Smith February 9, 2018 at 11:00 PM You haven't lost a step my friend, Witt as sharp as ever, not the same without you DT... Daniel Turner February 11, 2018 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Charlie! I'm still hovering. Like my memory, my muse is in and out. Believe me, it's not for lack of trying.

Carole Duet February 6, 2018 at 4:01 PM BAM!! Hey, Danny...this is a great poem (and a FAV)! Just love it. As usual, you are a word master. And, I know exactly what you mean because this poem hit me between the eyes!! Daniel Turner February 8, 2018 at 10:23 AM Thank you, Carole. Where did the time go?

Supraja Kannan February 5, 2018 at 3:43 AM A great poem Daniel.. So glad to see you again... Missed your poems... Daniel Turner February 8, 2018 at 10:23 AM Thank you, Supraja. Nice to see you again also. I appreciate your kindness.

Eve Roper February 3, 2018 at 8:16 PM We all get sucker punched when we least expect it... it is ashame... enjoyed reading Mr Daniel... Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 11:32 PM Hello Mrs eve, Nice to see you again. I hope it made you smile. I would've ducked had I seen it coming.

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2018 at 7:39 PM LOVE LOVE LOVE it. Think I'll fave it. Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 8:11 PM Thank you, Andrea. Nice to see you again.

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2018 at 7:38 PM so did YOU have lots of summer flings, Danny boy? Or are you just teasing? Well, it's so nice to see you with a new poem up. Let me sample this now!! Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 8:12 PM I wouldn't go right to "lots". A couple when I was young.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2018 at 7:04 AM - Life is too short, Daniel ... we can not "lose" the time :) - Nice to see you back - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 9:15 AM Thank you, Anne Lise. I have missed you all so much. I'm still having problems with writer's block. my muse is being awful stubborn.

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2018 at 11:31 PM Hi Daniel, this poem made me grin from ear to ear! I am so very happy to see you post again!! You have been very much missed by me and lots of poets here. I could relate to your humor in this piece. Time seems to fly by so fast. I got a text from my daughter today wishing me Happy Groundhog Day. I was so happy she let me know or I would have missed watching my favorite movie...Groundhog Day. I love reading your poetry, it always cheers me. Love, Connie xxoo : ) Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 9:11 AM Thank you, Mrs Connie. I've got the worst case of writer's block. Just can't seem to find any inspiration nor can I find the words. I try everyday. I appreciate your kindness.

Akkina Downing February 2, 2018 at 5:17 PM Well no wonder you never reply to all my emails... Lol! Danny, I've missed you! I'm super happy to see you back for sure :) I enjoyed your humor poem very much! Hugs and smiles :) Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 9:09 AM Thank you, Kina. I have missed you all too. I just wish my muse would come back to stay.

Alexis Y. February 2, 2018 at 2:40 PM Hi Daniel, It's so good to see ya posting again. Enjoyed the humour as well. We all get sucker punched at some point in our lives. I Look forward to reading you more often. I missed your pen :-) Alexis Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 9:07 AM Thank you, Alexis. I hope it made you smile. I'll be glad when my muse comes back to stay.

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2018 at 8:35 AM I am glad to see your poem, DT, after a long time, hope all is well:) I enjoyed this very much:) Daniel Turner February 3, 2018 at 9:06 AM Thank you, Jo. I hope it made you smile. I've been in a funk. My muse very seldom comes around anymore.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 1, 2018 at 10:31 PM I giggle but oh, a write so heavy and so light, wonderfully penned Daniel! Enjoyed :) xomo! Daniel Turner February 1, 2018 at 11:14 PM Thank you, Maureen. Making you giggle was my intent. I am happy it made you laugh.

Lewis Raynes February 1, 2018 at 6:11 PM what a great poem Daniel, beware the days becoming weeks becoming years becoming too late. Daniel Turner February 1, 2018 at 11:09 PM Yes my friend, so true. life is way too short and time passes way too fast. Thank you for reading and commenting. nice to see you again, Lewis. i hope it made you smile.

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2018 at 3:48 PM you're back with more power and proficiency, daniel... this is a knock-out... stay well and hugggs Daniel Turner February 1, 2018 at 11:08 PM Thank you, nette. Nice to see you again. I hope it made you smile.

Frederic Parker February 1, 2018 at 1:44 PM you have described the conundrum for us all poet...glad to read you again Daniel Turner February 1, 2018 at 2:47 PM Thank you, Frederic. It is nice to see you again. Hoping you are well. i hope it made you smile.

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