Such Small Wonders

Such small wonders this autumn yields...                
watch the squirrel busily collecting nuts
stashing them away for winter's depths 
let's hope he remembers where they are

The apple trees heavily laden, branches sag
ponies happily munching at the wind falls
tractors hard at work bringing in the crops
piling it up in the barns, ready for winter

Lazy smoke drifting from the chimney pots
carrying  heavenly smells of roasting meats 
cattle lowing,  announcing  it is milking time 
I drink these wonders in, happy to be alive

written 08/13/2013 by Shadow Hamilton
contest   Pick a line any line

 Autumn's Breath by Barbara Gorelick 

the first line of this poem is the line I used
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Shadow, lovely win ............ luv ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 7:22 AM
hi and Ty Skat good to see you Shadow x smile
Jones Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 12:42 PM
I love your world Shadow....congratulations
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 12:57 PM
hi Donna and ty for reading Shadow x smile
Adams Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 7:27 AM
your words paint quite a lovely scene, congrats on your win :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 12:58 PM
so kind of you Sandra Ty Shadow x smile
A   Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 8:29 PM
Shadow, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Ty so much for your review Linda and congrats Shadow x smile
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Shadow love xx
Hamilton Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 6:11 AM
hi Mandy ty dear have good weekend Shadow x smile
Mehta Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 8:56 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:37 AM
hi Dr Ram and ty dear appreciated Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 8:43 AM
You made me feel like I was there. Congratulations and thanks for entering my contest.
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:38 AM
hope you enjoyed being there Ty for running the contest and congrats Shadow x smile
May Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:41 AM
wonderful imagery Shadow.....congrats on your win....thank you so much for stopping by....
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Ty Joseph I also greatly enjoyed yours Shadow x smile
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:20 AM
I breathed in every wonderous sense your pen put on the page. I am amazed at these small things. They just stay the same with age.
Hamilton Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 4:31 PM
hi Robert and best of all they are always free. Ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Mckenzie Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 3:28 PM
Very nicely done! Best wishes in the contest I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry! Laura :0 )
Hamilton Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 4:42 PM
hi Laura a fun contest Ty for reading and wishes gl to you also Ty Shadow x smiles
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