Home » Poems » Jeff Connelly » such much about nothing

such much about nothing

“such much about nothing” feck and friggin to my chagrin while trying to monorhyme like Lin i find i’m back at square one once again in a square root of one imaginary unit tailspin

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/30/2023 4:03:00 PM

delightful and imaginative....sometimes I'm at square one, too, my poetry is in a tailspin, spinning out of control. Nicely done...and have a great evening, Sara

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/1/2023 4:35:00 AM

I imagine we all have our artistic blocks; and I don't mean Legos lol. This was myy first attempt at a monorhyme Sara, but if you want to read properly written ones, check out Lin Lane

Lin Lane

Date: 11/29/2023 11:33:00 PM

It’s 1:30 am and try as I might I cannot sleep. Thanks for the mention, Jeff. ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 11/30/2023 6:44:00 AM

It's been a bane for years, Jeff. I've just learned to live with it...truly a residual effect... full moon or not. Sometimes I just turn on a light and read or write.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/30/2023 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Lin, but sorry to read about your insomnia. I hope my mention of you wasn't burning your ears... Full Moon was Monday. I've always called this kind of sleeplessness: residual full moon effect