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Such Earthy Joy

At last, metro’s traffic comes to a halt… the quarter moon peeps between hilltops as a lingering gladness warms my flesh— half steady, half shimmering when early evening’s air prances like fine gauze, shedding time’s need for revelry. Unzipping my mind to surrender to the upbeat tempo of glittering dusk naked in earthy bliss, I feel all the pinpoints of the sky tingling on my limbs numbed by rind’s toil. Resting a bit to groove with merriment borne from the wake of laughing stars, my limbs pirouette with the rhythm of wildflowers fondling the light, embracing the pleasure of now ...and to dance, dance joy! Trashed #2 Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings By nette onclaud 9/12/2015
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October 14, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Nette, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
Romaine Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Hey Nette, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem winning placement in this great contest! Be Blessed, Neva
Cheema Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Congrats Nette! The imagery of the moon peeping fromt he hills and the pleasure of revelry and dance is beautiful!
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October 12, 2015 at 3:09 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win nette!
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Congrats Nette. A superb piece of poetry art my friend!
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Beautiful words, Nette. Congratulations ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:56 PM
I agree with the comments below, Nette. So very uplifting and beautifully written. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 2:44 PM
this is so uplifting Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:29 PM
Conrad's on your win! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:01 PM
If this doesn't lift one's spirits, nothing will !! Just lovely Nette!! So glad it was given a 2nd chance !!!
Peranteau Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 10:19 AM
A beautifully soft write dear poet! A pleasure to read this fine Saturday morning...Have a wonderful weekend Nette....much love, james
Gonza Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Well, I have to tell you while reading your poem, I realized I was smiling. Fantastic feel of exuberant poetry!
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September 12, 2015 at 8:38 AM
- Best wishes for the weekend, you can dance in joy with your friends :) - Lovely poem :) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 2:51 AM
nette, 101 beautiful words so elegantly penned, wonderful and thanks for visiting my poem, father .... it is finished now if you care to return
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