Ralph Sergi Poet Limerick

Such a Pail

Such a pail 
I have a sweet beautiful daughter
Who is always fetching me water
Each day without fail
she has such a pail
When my daughter brings me the water

Limerick  Contest  December 24, 2015
Sponsored by Jan Allison

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Ralph Sergi December 30, 2015 at 7:47 PM Hi Andrea: I made a change in the poem but I was too late to re enter. (Ha ha) This is the second time this has happened in her popular limerick contests.

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2015 at 6:56 PM hey, I saw this one before, but can't find my comment! It is right on for rhyme and syllable count!! Can't wait till Jan judges these!

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2015 at 2:17 PM Ralph.. Happy New Years... Love LINDA

Maurice Rigoler December 30, 2015 at 6:43 AM Ah, yes, I now get it. Thanks for the clarification. / M

Maurice Rigoler December 29, 2015 at 8:45 PM Didn't know there was a limerick contest. Will check it out. Not sure of Sara's play on words. Best to you. / M Ralph Sergi December 30, 2015 at 6:37 AM Hi Maurice: a sad attempt on "such appeal"

Sara Kendrick December 29, 2015 at 4:24 PM Reads like a winner..Great contest entry..I like the play on words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara