Get Your Premium Membership

Such a pail

Such a pail I have a sweet beautiful daughter Who is always fetching me water Each day without fail she has such a pail When my daughter brings me the water Limerick Contest December 24, 2015 Sponsored by Jan Allison

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/30/2015 7:47:00 PM
Hi Andrea: I made a change in the poem but I was too late to re enter. (Ha ha) This is the second time this has happened in her popular limerick contests.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2015 6:56:00 PM
hey, I saw this one before, but can't find my comment! It is right on for rhyme and syllable count!! Can't wait till Jan judges these!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2015 2:17:00 PM
Ralph.. Happy New Years... Love LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2015 6:43:00 AM
Ah, yes, I now get it. Thanks for the clarification. / M
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2015 8:45:00 PM
Didn't know there was a limerick contest. Will check it out. Not sure of Sara's play on words. Best to you. / M
Login to Reply
Sergi Avatar
Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/30/2015 6:37:00 AM
Hi Maurice: a sad attempt on "such appeal"
Date: 12/29/2015 4:24:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Great contest entry..I like the play on words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Login to Reply