Such a pail

Such a pail 
I have a sweet beautiful daughter
Who is always fetching me water
Each day without fail
she has such a pail
When my daughter brings me the water

Limerick  Contest  December 24, 2015
Sponsored by Jan Allison

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Date: 12/30/2015 7:47:00 PM
Hi Andrea: I made a change in the poem but I was too late to re enter. (Ha ha) This is the second time this has happened in her popular limerick contests.
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:56:00 PM
hey, I saw this one before, but can't find my comment! It is right on for rhyme and syllable count!! Can't wait till Jan judges these!
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Date: 12/30/2015 2:17:00 PM
Ralph.. Happy New Years... Love LINDA
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:43:00 AM
Ah, yes, I now get it. Thanks for the clarification. / M
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:45:00 PM
Didn't know there was a limerick contest. Will check it out. Not sure of Sara's play on words. Best to you. / M
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/30/2015 6:37:00 AM
Hi Maurice: a sad attempt on "such appeal"
Date: 12/29/2015 4:24:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Great contest entry..I like the play on words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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