L Milton Hankins Poet Rhyme

Such a Clumsy Critter

While watching my babysitter
Playing with glitter,
I fell into the kitty litter! --
I am such a clumsy critter.

My brother will twitter
Our babysitter is covered in glitter
She is such a kidder,
But, I fell into the kitty litter!
I am such a clumsy critter.

My kitty has five kitties in her litter
They were watching my babysitter
Playing with glitter,
When I fell into the kitty litter!
I am such a clumsy critter.

My mommy is a good knitter,
My brother really likes to twitter,
My kitten has five kitties in her litter,
Everyone was watching my babysitter
Playing with glitter,
When I fell into the kitty litter!
I am such a clumsy critter. 

Written April 14, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger April 17, 2022 at 9:28 PM Oh my goodness! You make it look easy. I know it was not. L Milton Hankins April 18, 2022 at 8:09 AM Thank you, Caren. Another enjoyable write for me. I really like to do this kind of word play.

Indiana Shaw April 15, 2022 at 1:38 PM This is hilarious Milt's, it's tongue twisting catchy and has you wanting more, you could just see it all reeling off in front of your eyes as you read it, ha, ha, ha . . . ; ) L Milton Hankins April 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thanks, Indiana. I had fun writing it, and I'm happy you enjoyed it. Be careful never to fall into kitty litter!

Demetrios Trifiatis April 15, 2022 at 11:33 AM Witty and amusing, dearest Milton. Happy Easter, my friend. Blessings. L Milton Hankins April 15, 2022 at 12:12 PM Thank you so much, Demetrios. Happy Easter to you, as well, my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos April 15, 2022 at 8:32 AM Hi Milton, most men are clumsy but we love you all as you are. Great rhyme, rhythm and a neat beat to it! Hugs and blessings Jennifer. L Milton Hankins April 15, 2022 at 11:06 AM Thanks, Jennifer. But, I've known a few clumsy women in my time, too.

Alexis Y. April 15, 2022 at 7:46 AM WoW! Milt I enjoyed this from the start to finish. It was a good story you told in the monorhyme form. Everything moved so fast it was almost like a tongue twister as well. Good, content, and imagery. That’s what I got from it, well done. Have a great day. Happy Easter to you and your loved ones;-)Alexis L Milton Hankins April 15, 2022 at 7:54 AM Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it, Alexis. Happy Easter to you, too!