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Succumbing To the Age

My psychiatrist ain't cheap now that I swapped the basic for an iPhone 4G. Guess them Apples really do keep the doctors away! That is if you have the funds to pay...

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Date: 5/24/2013 9:24:00 AM
Hahha, cute poem! iPhone4G...Fancy. ;) Psychiatrists...we pay them so they can just write things on their notepad and say, "Mmhmm,"
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/24/2013 2:00:00 PM
Oops! Well, obviously your brother is more than likely an amazing psychiatrist!!! :D :D
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/24/2013 10:52:00 AM
Haha... well I do somewhat agree with you. However my brother-in-law is a psychiatrist so I'm sure there's more to it than that.
Date: 5/21/2013 7:50:00 AM
Love it!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/21/2013 11:20:00 PM
Thanks Rick!
Date: 5/21/2013 6:35:00 AM
lol true indeed :).. hello friend :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/21/2013 11:20:00 PM
Thanks again Sasha!
Date: 5/21/2013 5:26:00 AM
Ha ha! Quite the witty remark there my friend! I personally have a basic phone....I can't afford a nicer phone at this time! But my wife on the other hand has one, yes I know, I give to her what she wants, if I know whats good for me, ha ha! This is a very clever poem my friend! I loved reading it this morning, Great Work!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/21/2013 11:19:00 PM
I used to be dead serious on NOT switching over to the smart phones... I just found them unnecessary. Though I do admit, I'm a bit hooked on them now... never would have concerned psychiatry before... but now? he he he...
Date: 5/21/2013 3:47:00 AM
This is superb, Timothy! Hey...whatever happened to giving teachers apples??? ;) Then again...I like m Samsung III G...Don't now half of what it can do, but it's pretty! ;)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/21/2013 11:18:00 PM
Haha... I'm the same way! I love my iPhone, but I don't use a fraction of the Apps that it's capable of.
Date: 5/21/2013 3:19:00 AM
You are a true critic. well done. I like your line"Guess them Apples really do keep the doctors away!" Take care love manel
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/21/2013 11:17:00 PM
You are very kind, Manel! Your comments always being so open and honest... I love that!

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