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Those who deserve in return , more , Often are betrayed playfully by Fate ; The turmoil and the hardships in spate , Leave the invincible contender sore ; One might as well lose the pursued track , Or the path that to triumph doth lead ; Cruel Destiny and her goon squad heed But to the whims and pre-ordained crack ; Thus bringing down the well built stand , And even the earnestly seasoned soul ; Yet even the righteous Divinity cries 'foul' ! If the honest struggler ever fails to land ; Every pursuit just , fair and nobly done Surely fetches blessed success from heaven .

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Date: 9/19/2024 12:11:00 AM
Thankyou for your heart -felt response.Happy to see how good thoughts and humane feelings bring together from all parts of the world. The essence of all religions lies in fellow felling, goodness and nobility.I am happy again that our thoughts bring us together.thankyou a lot , Stay blessed
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Date: 9/11/2024 11:17:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:10:00 AM
Thankyou for your heart -felt response.Happy to see how good thoughts and humane feelings bring together from all parts of the world. The essence of all religions lies in fellow felling, goodness and nobility.I am happy again that our thoughts bring us together.thankyou a lot , Stay blessed
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Vidya Pandarinath
Date: 9/19/2024 12:06:00 AM
Thankyou for ryour heart -felt response.Happy to see how good thoughts and humane feelings bring together from all parts of the world. The essence of all religions lies in fellow felling, goodness and nobility.I am happy again that our thoughts bring us together.thankyou a lot , Stay blessed

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