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Success

Its done,
its done!
Its really, really finally done!!
That mountain piled so high
that stretched beyond my eye
well its no lie ...
its really, really done!
See how I smile in smug success
because, its done!
I did it!!
I did it!!
I did it!!
Hooray for me,
whoop whoopee!!
All that laundry ...
is done!!

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Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 11/13/2008 6:51:00 PM With the new age and automatic washers and dryers, even I can do the wash. (Of course I have a hard time explaining to the guys why my underwear is pink). I guess a red blouse should be in a separate load from the whites and the clorox. Have a great day, Sue. Vince Login to Reply

Steve Malebranche Date: 11/12/2008 9:52:00 AM This was funny...i feel the same way i'm done with my family's laundry...it is such a relief... Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 11/12/2008 7:04:00 AM LOL... Sue this is a hoot, I don't know if I'd have the energy to jump, shout/holler whoopee after tackling a mountain of laundry, lol, but I sure would feel relieved knowing that all was clean and put in its proper place :-) Thank you for sharing such an amusing read and for your welcome comments on my poetry. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 11/12/2008 2:38:00 AM Very creative and funny. reminds me of a Dr. Seuss write. I guess you could be Dr. Sue...kindest regards, Raul Login to Reply

Festus Mwiti Date: 11/12/2008 1:50:00 AM A pretty good poem for a pile of laundry. Its great how a poet can turn such a normal and mundane thing as washing to a fun to read poem. Thanks for your comments on my peom I really appreciate it. Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 11/11/2008 11:22:00 PM A clean scene Sue.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Login to Reply

Date: 11/11/2008 9:33:00 PM Oh having that laundry done is indeed a whippy skippy celebration. Having teens, it's only done for a moment then sweatshirts, jeans, etc take our moment of triumph away. I got a chucke out of this one. I can really relate to this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words regarding my poetry. Happy Writing!! Kareen Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 11/10/2008 3:00:00 PM Sue, this is too funny. A great accomplishment! I truly know the feeling! ~lol~ Love, Shar Login to Reply

Michael Torres Date: 11/10/2008 2:43:00 PM Sue this is so funny excellent write really enjoyed thank you Michael Torres Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 11/10/2008 12:45:00 PM Boy, I can relate to this one!! I tell my husband, either we are really dirty, or really clean freaks...'cause there is always, always more laundry, no matter how often I do it!! :) Carrie Login to Reply

Jay Del Fierro Date: 11/10/2008 10:48:00 AM hey Sue Mason !!!....thanks for the chuckle,i'm still laughing inside after reading this...much needed,since the radical side of my mind can use a little lightening up sometimes....by the way,i did my laundry yesterday :).........peace , jay Login to Reply