Subtle Shifts

At times I think,” I wish I would of felt this when I were younger, I would have known! ” Then I remember the “rites of passage”  
arriving in autumn on the the wing of a ring-neck dove.
Weaving light between knowing and unknowing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 2, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Another poetic gem that creates such mesmerizing images in the mind. This definitely provoked some thought in me and I like that in a poem. Really nice Faith. I can't wait to see more from you.
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December 5, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Thank you so much Chris! I am enjoying reading your poetry as well.
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December 2, 2016 at 12:42 AM
So true! We have turtle-neck doves here, I haven't heard of a ring-neck, though! Different countries I presume! Great write, Faith!
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December 5, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Thank you so much Rick!
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