Subtle Illustrations

Drifting along on tranquil opportunities 
Embellished within the nicest ingenuities
Animating all your stanzas and verses 
Giving meaning to them  with so much purpose 
Never holding back your promises of more 
While you add creative imagination galore
Exploring your lines amongst their transition 
Acknowledging their intent being my mission
Intuitive cartographic portrayed expression
Removing all of the unwanted indiscretion 
Appreciating each of our distinct differences 
Regardless of consequences or significance 
Influenced characteristics written in script 
Gliding along your mind’s many swells and dips 
Returning the potential to a clear lucidity 
Gracefully floating on your unwavering fluidity 
Riding upon your flow of subtle illustrations 
Conspicuous gallantry with trusted fixation 
Emotions I feel when experiencing your words 
While listen to your pieces that you record 
Leaves me forever lost in your articulation 
Evoking my soul, giving  my undying  adoration
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fleming Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Very lovely, Brenda Lee...very lovely indeed. :) john
Chiri Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 12:40 PM
Thank you so much John Fleming ;)
Hamilton Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:31 PM
Wow Brenda you have written an exceptional piece here, I especially enjoyed your interesting word pairings and unique rhymes, well done!
Chiri Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Thank you so much I truly appreciate your warm comment!;)
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