Subtle Gaze

My hands gaze toward the tenderness of life’s flow.
My heart, beating before the breath,
Serenity runs through my blood
As I begin to discover my senses—
And all that I have ever felt was made of water.

I instantly inspire fire’s burning rays,
Before the water tests its melancholic phase,
After air suffocates in faded absence,
Die in despair from cognitive dissonance,
Within matter—by its essence.

Reaching the higher purpose,
Oneness in openness,
Solace in sadness,
Harmony in chaos.

Dear fear, you shall never feel
Your bouncing heart’s
Ultimate explosion—
Coded in motion,
To fulfill the concept of emotion
By the name of paradox
With galaxies’ devotion
And void’s lotion,
To attend higher vision,
Sight of God’s precision.

Let the heart choose,
Let the earth bruise,
Let me lose—
Or be lost in those eyes of yours.
and void's lotion
to attend higher vision
sight of god precision,
Let the heart choose 
Let the earth bruise 
Let me lose
Or be lost in those eyes of yours.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 10/21/2025 4:37:00 AM
Nice one Sahar, such great imagery and expression throughout this lovely piece, have a blessed day,Gordon
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Date: 10/11/2025 9:49:00 AM
Such sweet poetry and use of words Sahar. We're glad you're here
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Sahar Noumi
Date: 10/11/2025 9:54:00 AM
Such encouraging presence you have !
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