Subtle Earth Hell

live they in the subtle hell, on earth the levels change by smell, protest the would be righteous, where murder doth incite us, though the citadel has fell, you think yer doing well? yes hell is here to spite us, Don I suscribe to the theory, mine, that this is a minor hell world where we all come at different levels of misery to suffer for earlier sins....think of the suffering around the globe, by different people in better and worse circumstances....perhaps its why Nigeria has very cunning con men and pirates... who really rob you blind if they can ....the suffering aint working there? From my perspective view here in Australia the Corporations and the rich are driving our people down to third world status, by importing fly in workers, on special visas to work for very little wages...These cheap workers from the Philippines and Asia live in shipping containers and are then charged for the travel fares. The Federal Tory Government wants a lower basic wage , This is happening world wide, Jobs were moved offshore the last 20 years, but Asia wants equal pay for the same work. Hence the next move by greed, to rob the poor yes indeed, using fly in workers to force the wages down...

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Date: 5/27/2015 6:39:00 PM
From my perspective view here in Australia the Corporations and the rich are driving our people down to third world status, by importing fly in workers, on special visas to work for very little wages...These cheap workers from the Philippines and Asia live in shipping containers and are then charged for the travel fares. The Federal Tory Government wants a lower basic wage , This is happening world wide, Jobs were moved offshore the last 20 years, but Asia wants equal pay for the same work. Hence the next move by greed, to rob the poor yes indeed, using fly in workers to force the wages down...
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:20:00 PM
Don, this write is insightful!.... for most don't believe in hell per say for they are already living in hell here on earth, I can not fathom living in a 3rd world country surrounded by mayhem and evil. Good write. Hugs
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Date: 5/26/2015 11:05:00 PM
I suscribe to the theory, mine, that this is a minor hell world where we all come at different levels of misery to suffer for earlier sins....think of the suffering around the globe, by different people in better and worse circumstances....perhaps its why Nigeria has very cunning con men and pirates... who really rob you blind if they can ....the suffering aint working there?
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