Submittng
Submitting stalwart under Orions belt
Asking for more, what's given forever svelte
Feeling any hotter, my soul would melt
Emotional depth, of ardent eyes I've felt
Holding the best hand, life's dealer ever delt
Fully of flushed hearts, two of a kind indwelt
As my will forever folds, in and of you it knelt
Engraved the word forever, in the gold I smelt
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