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Submitting stalwart under Orions belt Asking for more, what's given forever svelte Feeling any hotter, my soul would melt Emotional depth, of ardent eyes I've felt Holding the best hand, life's dealer ever delt Fully of flushed hearts, two of a kind indwelt As my will forever folds, in and of you it knelt Engraved the word forever, in the gold I smelt

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Date: 5/10/2023 2:15:00 PM
Very enchanting. I liked the last line. Your words 'soar', so well done!
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Date: 5/10/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much Paige your support is greatly appretiated! A.S.
Date: 5/10/2023 6:06:00 AM
Nicely penned feelings of love, As. A good read this morning:)
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Date: 5/10/2023 6:12:00 AM
I do so enjoy the feeling brought forth by loving and caring. I appreciate the visit my friend. Sincerely A.S

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