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Hahaha she laughed 
It’s ok, it’s me, he said
As his lusty words 
crept in my ear 
clawed at my brain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 10, 2017 at 2:59 PM
Rather dark, methinks. Almost as if she knew what was coming and tried, unsuccessfully - to her abject horror, to laugh it off! All rather terrible in an appalling sort of way...cleverly executed, Mari. My best regards. :) john
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