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Hahaha she laughed It’s ok, it’s me, he said As his lusty words crept in my ear clawed at my brain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/10/2017 2:59:00 PM
Rather dark, methinks. Almost as if she knew what was coming and tried, unsuccessfully - to her abject horror, to laugh it off! All rather terrible in an appalling sort of way...cleverly executed, Mari. My best regards. :) john
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