Submersion

Rain fell inexorably down, 

filling every ginnel and spit

'til all was a blanket, a crown, 

and naught projected up from it.

 

Beneath were clock towers and tall

surfaces, drifting with foam, 

buildings once rife with activity

now silent, no longer a home

 

'cept for fishes and floating debris,

hives not humming with energy,

still as a grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 14, 2016 at 7:40 PM
A lovely descriptive write Keith, I felt lonliness and despair from this fine write.
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