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Submerged In Thought

Submerged in thought, my mind flows. I'm a majestic river with all it's curves and bends running over rocks 'round obstructions gathering strength and speed. Above I catch a glimpse of the sun shimmering off the eye of young cygnet so white and pure without commitment calm, loving and carefree looking to soak up all my nutrients. to be young once again with a new chance at love no fear of what lies beneath the surface. Making memories forgetting fantasies. Here I sit lost in thought about life and love trials and pain blessings and destinies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/15/2015 7:30:00 PM
This is a great write you have here Tim, sometimes being lost in thought produces a blessing we never counted on. The blessing here is your fantastic creation. Blessings Carl
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Date: 5/14/2015 3:53:00 AM
Well some things never change Tim,and with talent like this, it shouldn't. love it. I have wrote similar, but yours is a winner for me.So true. it is like a river. hope you are keeping ok. my best wishes. Pete. A 7 at least.
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Date: 5/13/2015 8:21:00 PM
How enchanting this is Tim...It is a splash of serene beauty..A favourite !Charma
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:45:00 PM
Thanks Charmu ..... I love the beauty of the young swan and the power and beauty of the flowing river....big hugs Tim.
Date: 5/13/2015 6:12:00 PM
nice one, tim! it's great to get those thoughts onto paper (and in poetic form, no less!)
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Date: 5/13/2015 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Ilene .,.have a wonderful evening Tim

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