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Sublime Time

Everyday I wake up life has a lot to take up time but remember you cant rewind time we have it hard enough to erase thoughts from our mind sublime the years that you are suppose to something with life like kids and a wife nice everyday we struggle and strife just so we can live nice what is the meaning of living nice defined by people with millions of dollars who hide behind the government not knowing what they truly have in mind so i am going to stay on my grind swing from every single vine until i find a field of grapes rare enough to make holy wine. -TA

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Date: 5/2/2018 7:25:00 AM
Wowsers! What a creative masterpiece. I do not feel words would be enough, so I shall just say "This is brilliant!"
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Todd Aguilar Jr.
Date: 5/27/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 5/2/2018 7:22:00 AM
By people with millions of dollars who hide behind the government. Oh, yes! This just got really deep, and interesting. Nicely put, Todd. Nicely said!
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Todd Aguilar Jr.
Date: 5/27/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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