Todd Aguilar Jr. Poet Lyric

Sublime Time

Everyday I wake up
life has a lot to take up

time 

but remember you cant rewind time
we have it hard enough to erase thoughts from our mind

sublime

the years that you are suppose to something with life
like kids and a wife

nice

everyday we struggle and strife
just so we can live nice

what is the meaning of living nice

defined 

by people with millions of dollars who hide behind
the government not knowing what they truly have in mind

so i am going to stay on my grind
swing from every single vine
until i find a field of grapes rare enough to make holy wine. -TA

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Caren Krutsinger May 2, 2018 at 7:25 AM Wowsers! What a creative masterpiece. I do not feel words would be enough, so I shall just say "This is brilliant!" Todd Aguilar Jr. May 27, 2018 at 5:30 PM Thank you so much!

Caren Krutsinger May 2, 2018 at 7:22 AM By people with millions of dollars who hide behind the government. Oh, yes! This just got really deep, and interesting. Nicely put, Todd. Nicely said! Todd Aguilar Jr. May 27, 2018 at 5:30 PM Thank you so much!