Sublime Awareness

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In a corner of my room I seek sublime awareness, I attempt to transcend my past, present and future; Such a little place of tranquility where I find higher purpose, Letting go of the now and finding myself in nature. My meditation takes me deep into my inner power, Transcendence and serene knowledge and abandon; The vastness of self, interpretation of life, the creative writer, I float in delight through landscapes before hidden. I have found the infinite part of my unlimited being, My third eye is activated and I am in a realm higher; Letting go, discarding things of no purpose including feelings, And in my meditation I am awake and not just a dreamer. ____________________ August 15, 2015 Rhyme Submitted to the contest, Least Views, Casarah Nance Third Place

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/16/2015 1:55:00 AM

Wonderful imagery n powerful words broken! Congrats on big win!

Skat A

Date: 9/15/2015 2:16:00 PM

Broken, nice win. SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/15/2015 4:32:00 AM

Felt so much at peace reading your write, Broken Wings!

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/14/2015 6:33:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this poem, Broken. Can't imagine it had few views, but I found your process of meditation through your imagery so beautiful and relaxing. Congratulation on your excellent win! Hugs, Sandra

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/14/2015 6:15:00 PM

I enjoyed this a lot...seems like everything I read of yours I find amazing, you have an awesome pen!

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/15/2015 2:31:00 PM

Beautiful realization through meditation. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/15/2015 2:28:00 PM

What a beautiful write BW, it is eloquence and lovely and thanks for your comment (advise) to my page. I was not around for days and this restricted my hand on soup, I just returned a wee minute ago and I am exhausted, tomorrow I will try to catch up with things. we are at night here.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2015 8:44:00 AM

I enjoyed slipping through your stream of consciousness. It was a refreshing journey.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2015 12:06:00 AM

So well written, BW....This really shows your convictions. I particularly liked that last line.