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Sublime Awareness


In a corner of my room I seek sublime awareness,
      I attempt to transcend my past, present and future;
Such a little place of tranquility where I find higher purpose,
            Letting go of the now and finding myself in nature.

My meditation takes me deep into my inner power,
      Transcendence and serene knowledge and abandon;
The vastness of self, interpretation of life, the creative writer,
            I float in delight through landscapes before hidden.

I have found the infinite part of my unlimited being,
     My third eye is activated and I am in a realm higher;
Letting go, discarding things of no purpose including feelings,
          And in my meditation I am awake and not just a dreamer.

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August 15, 2015

Rhyme 

Submitted to the contest, Least Views, Casarah Nance 

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/16/2015 1:55:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n powerful words broken! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:16:00 PM
Broken, nice win. SKAT
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Date: 9/15/2015 4:32:00 AM
Felt so much at peace reading your write, Broken Wings!
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:33:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem, Broken. Can't imagine it had few views, but I found your process of meditation through your imagery so beautiful and relaxing. Congratulation on your excellent win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:15:00 PM
I enjoyed this a lot...seems like everything I read of yours I find amazing, you have an awesome pen!
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Date: 8/15/2015 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful realization through meditation. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 8/15/2015 2:28:00 PM
What a beautiful write BW, it is eloquence and lovely and thanks for your comment (advise) to my page. I was not around for days and this restricted my hand on soup, I just returned a wee minute ago and I am exhausted, tomorrow I will try to catch up with things. we are at night here.
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Date: 8/15/2015 8:44:00 AM
I enjoyed slipping through your stream of consciousness. It was a refreshing journey.
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Date: 8/15/2015 12:06:00 AM
So well written, BW....This really shows your convictions. I particularly liked that last line.
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