Sublime
I have dipped my pen in the sublime,
it is my gift to you...
And as I write this tale
I hope your dreams come true
But the children today are confused
and you, my friend, may ignore
But then I guess
I shouldn't have given to you before
I gave my gift, it's just for you
And though this story I spin may be a bit alarming
once you read it through
I'm sure that you'll find it charming
The words may seem to trap you
in a flurry of imagery
and now that you've truly seen,
you'll look at the world very differently...
~Marie Viloria~
9th place in the contest: Writing In The Sublime ~
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