''sublime''

The essence of the sky in bloom so true,in blue.Over the mountains,as far as you can
see.The sun wrapped in a gold ring smiles as we discover day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Many congratulation's Kacey on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles
Greenlee Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Thank you all for your warm words.I am awee of all the outstanding poetry I read.
Freeman Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:43 PM
Great to see your poem honored HM. Kacey, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Kacey, this is lovely! I really like the description of the sun "wrapped in a gold ring." Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 6:43 AM
This is a wonderful Tanka.Congrats on your win,Kacey---kashinath
Brown Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 5:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kacey in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 4:34 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Enjoyed reading your very creative work..It is so descriptive...Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Congrats Kacey on your HM in the blue and gold contest luv.. awesome words.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your HM Win in Rick's Contest, Kacey! Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Very descriptive and expressive..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Tacito Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Discovery is the planted seed to joy...if we water it correctly. This was damn nice.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Lovely lines Kacey .. if u enter the new contest Blue and Gold posted on the contest page .. read the rules as it calls for specific form luv.. good luck if u enter ..happy weekend and thankxx for your WOW...
Greenlee Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 7:44 AM
nice job me...
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