Subjects of Time

Subjects Of Time
As a fine clock
Run by motion of the earth,
We are masters of 
Gears and lubrication
Though remain 
The subjects of time….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Volumes Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 3:38 AM
are we the masters Joe, or the slaves to time ? Sometimes i think the latter. It doesnt matter your poem is fine
DiMino Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 2:10 PM
It is our choice always. We can even be both at the same time.
Rose  Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 1:25 PM
We are and always will remain subject to time. But every now and then we hit a magic moment and that moment becomes divine. Thanks for sharing such a delightful poem.
DiMino Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Love your poetic comment! And you are so right--those divine moments transcend time: they are immortal!
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