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Subjective Interlude

flowers in conversation or confrontation in white-bright light. duet, leaning as if elbowing the window of an automobile, glaring-blank stare. the other with violet eyes - the kind that drives the point home. 5/20/2021

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Date: 5/20/2021 2:01:00 PM
True, there are probably as many hues in colors as there are words in a dictionary. As sometimes silence speaks volumes. The warmth of one can indeed break the ice of another, if given a radiant glance. Great write! Outstanding!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 5/20/2021 8:18:00 AM
A metaphoric masterpiece which begins with the first line and never releases the reader.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/20/2021 5:51:00 AM
I imagine this was written in metaphoric language of which you are so adept. Well expressed. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!

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