Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Subjective Interlude

flowers in conversation 
or
confrontation 
in white-bright light.
duet, leaning
as if elbowing the window
of an automobile,
glaring-blank stare.
the other with violet eyes -
the kind
that drives the point
home.

5/20/2021

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Joseph P. DiMino May 20, 2021 at 2:01 PM True, there are probably as many hues in colors as there are words in a dictionary. As sometimes silence speaks volumes. The warmth of one can indeed break the ice of another, if given a radiant glance. Great write! Outstanding! Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 8:34 AM Thank you, Joe!

Caren Krutsinger May 20, 2021 at 8:18 AM A metaphoric masterpiece which begins with the first line and never releases the reader. Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 8:34 AM Thank you, my friend!

Victor Buhagiar May 20, 2021 at 5:51 AM I imagine this was written in metaphoric language of which you are so adept. Well expressed. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues May 21, 2021 at 8:20 AM Thank you, Victor!