Subconscious Coma

subconscious coma

borrowed feelings
betrayed wisdom
abused intellect
stolen thoughts
discarded emotions
a subconscious coma
lost in the stratosphere
of humanities collective conscience
manipulating the laws of the universe
at war with the mystic
exploding ego's lost in stars
to be recycled
endlessly
forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations Kevin on your win.
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Congrats on a great win, Kevin
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September 5, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Kevin, :) Congratulations, on your awesome win. Many, many thanks for supporting my contest. Stop by and enjoy my newest blog, "Thoughts." if you'd like. Good night, LUV ~LINDA~
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