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if i had known that you were going to call her your world would i have ever gotten attached? if i had known she would be kissing you first would i have ever let myself relax because i told you i loved you, but how could we agree that we'd only be friends, even though you loved me yet you told me at night, that im worth more than any other girl now i find your status, calling her that girl that you wish you had never taken a single day apart now im sitting here trying not to cry, with a broken heart if i had known you would lie would i have wasted my time would i have talked to you all those long endless nights as i cradeled that happiness inside if i had known this wouldnt work that you would be with some other girl if i had known, would i have stopped myself could i have stopped myself from caring about you too much from wanting to feel your touch across my skin would you have told me if i had never found out would you tell me what this was all about or let me go on imagining that you were only mine or is she just my replacement this time? does she hold my space in your arms or is it me? replacing, subbing, for this girl

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Date: 11/6/2009 10:44:00 AM
Have a nice weekend Rain, the world is a mean machine, but true love is kind. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this afternoon Rain. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2009 1:24:00 PM
Hi Rain, nice to hear from you as always. Reading this I couldn't help but chuckle at what I think is a Facebook reference. So many times I led myself to really bad conclusions based on what Facebook seems to tell me. In your case it seems legitimate that your beau seems to have abandoned you in favor of someone else. Sometimes the insensitive types will say something very deep and meaningful only because they expect it's what their belles want to hear. Then they suddenly change their minds...
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