Stuporous Stance

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Our waking state’s but deep hypnotic trance Tamasic* sloth, knowing not who we are By our hand thus shaping soul’s circumstance We are he who we seek, yet look afar 03-July-2022 *Notes: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tamas_(philosophy) Sin of Sloth Poetry Contest Sponsor: Margarita Lillico

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 7/3/2022 1:42:00 PM

So reflective and authentic!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/3/2022 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Silpika

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/3/2022 6:58:00 AM

The ending line powerfully conveys the essence of your poem, US.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/3/2022 7:09:00 AM

It’s a knowing very few are prepared to accept Vijay, since it entails dropping deep rooted conditioning inflicted by traditional religious belief systems. The truth takes us straight into Advaita Vedanta (non-duality)