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Stunning Springtime

Bright butterflies love warm weather
They sometimes settle on beautiful blooms
Tall tulips, pretty pansies,
Lush lilacs, see vibrant visitors.
Little lambs drink mum’s milk
Then gambol gaily on green grass
Flora, fauna of scenic spring


Alliterisen Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Joseph May

05/14/23

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2023

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Linda Alice Fowler Date: 6/19/2023 7:17:00 AM Terrific alliteration Jan, and a very imagery-filled write. :) Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 5/30/2023 5:05:00 PM Ahh, this makes you feel immersed in the story. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/30/2023 12:54:00 PM I remember thinking how cute this was. Congrats, dear friend. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/29/2023 8:55:00 AM Lovely write Jan, Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 5/29/2023 6:00:00 AM Jan, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win~~lovely poem. Janice Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/19/2023 9:35:00 AM So lovely having you back and reading your poetry Jan, this one is such a pick me up after Winter poem and, so cute, warm and cheery. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. - GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/24/2023 1:54:00 PM Thanks so much Jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta Date: 5/17/2023 11:36:00 PM Enjoyed . Delighted. All the best for contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/17/2023 11:56:00 PM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/15/2023 3:06:00 PM Very joyful Jan, I love the sweet imagery! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/17/2023 11:56:00 PM thanks BJ:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/14/2023 11:07:00 PM Delightfully composed, Jan. Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/15/2023 1:18:00 PM thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 5/14/2023 3:25:00 PM this is delightful and charming, jan! your alliteration feels so natural and i love all of your examples. i'm still getting used to seeing your name on the list of new poems and it's a sight for sore eyes! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/15/2023 1:17:00 PM aww Ilene the end of your comment brought a lump to my throat, thanks so much for your continual support:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 5/14/2023 12:28:00 PM Hi Jan, You chose a nice picture to accompany your well-written verse. Best wishes in the contest—Happy Belated Mother's Day. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/15/2023 1:17:00 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 5/14/2023 12:08:00 PM Jan Allison gamboling in the soup kitchen is something Ive wanted to see for many months. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/14/2023 12:23:00 PM Aww Lin, the time was right in my life to return and I think I am here to stay now:-) hugs jan xx

Sotto Poet Date: 5/14/2023 12:03:00 PM Nicely penned poem with great thoughts and wonderful imagery. Happy Mother's Day dear friend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/14/2023 12:22:00 PM Thanks Sotto we celebrate Mother's day in March, it was so so hard being my first one without my amazing mum. hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/14/2023 11:24:00 AM Lovely, lighthearted…I want to gambol ;) Happy Sunday! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/14/2023 11:36:00 AM lol Kim I absolutely adore seeing the newborn lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/14/2023 11:13:00 AM Wonderful, my friend. Love seeing you here Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 5/14/2023 11:17:00 AM aww thanks Andrea its so good to be back and to have inspiration for contests:-) hugs Jan xx