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Stunning Springtime

Bright butterflies love warm weather
They sometimes settle on beautiful blooms
Tall tulips, pretty pansies,
Lush lilacs, see vibrant visitors.
Little lambs drink mum’s milk
Then gambol gaily on green grass
Flora, fauna of scenic spring


Alliterisen Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Joseph May

05/14/23

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Linda Alice Fowler June 19, 2023 at 7:17 AM Terrific alliteration Jan, and a very imagery-filled write. :)

David Fisher May 30, 2023 at 5:05 PM Ahh, this makes you feel immersed in the story.

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2023 at 12:54 PM I remember thinking how cute this was. Congrats, dear friend.

Joseph May May 29, 2023 at 8:55 AM Lovely write Jan, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy May 29, 2023 at 6:00 AM Jan, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win~~lovely poem. Janice

Jennifer Proxenos May 19, 2023 at 9:35 AM So lovely having you back and reading your poetry Jan, this one is such a pick me up after Winter poem and, so cute, warm and cheery. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. - GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. Jan Allison May 24, 2023 at 1:54 PM Thanks so much Jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta May 17, 2023 at 11:36 PM Enjoyed . Delighted. All the best for contest. Jan Allison May 17, 2023 at 11:56 PM Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Bj Legros Kelley May 15, 2023 at 3:06 PM Very joyful Jan, I love the sweet imagery! Jan Allison May 17, 2023 at 11:56 PM thanks BJ:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar May 14, 2023 at 11:07 PM Delightfully composed, Jan. Hugs. Jan Allison May 15, 2023 at 1:18 PM thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer May 14, 2023 at 3:25 PM this is delightful and charming, jan! your alliteration feels so natural and i love all of your examples. i'm still getting used to seeing your name on the list of new poems and it's a sight for sore eyes! Jan Allison May 15, 2023 at 1:17 PM aww Ilene the end of your comment brought a lump to my throat, thanks so much for your continual support:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. May 14, 2023 at 12:28 PM Hi Jan, You chose a nice picture to accompany your well-written verse. Best wishes in the contest—Happy Belated Mother's Day. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Jan Allison May 15, 2023 at 1:17 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane May 14, 2023 at 12:08 PM Jan Allison gamboling in the soup kitchen is something Ive wanted to see for many months. Jan Allison May 14, 2023 at 12:23 PM Aww Lin, the time was right in my life to return and I think I am here to stay now:-) hugs jan xx

Sotto Poet May 14, 2023 at 12:03 PM Nicely penned poem with great thoughts and wonderful imagery. Happy Mother's Day dear friend. Jan Allison May 14, 2023 at 12:22 PM Thanks Sotto we celebrate Mother's day in March, it was so so hard being my first one without my amazing mum. hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2023 at 11:24 AM Lovely, lighthearted…I want to gambol ;) Happy Sunday! Jan Allison May 14, 2023 at 11:36 AM lol Kim I absolutely adore seeing the newborn lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2023 at 11:13 AM Wonderful, my friend. Love seeing you here Jan Allison May 14, 2023 at 11:17 AM aww thanks Andrea its so good to be back and to have inspiration for contests:-) hugs Jan xx