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Stunning Spring Time

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Etheree Contest Sponsored by Ink Empress 4/09/25

Spring is here! Little lambs are gambolling in verdant pastures. Soon the white woolly ewes let hungry offspring suckle. I smile as the lamb's tails waggle as they guzzle the nutritious milk whilst the ever patient ewes munch fresh grass. Golden daffodils and pretty tulips add colour after dull winter days. Striped bumble bees collect pollen beautiful butterflies dance in the warmth of the sun Mother Nature gifts the whole planet. Stunning spring I just love!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/19/2025 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Stunning Spring Time" Etheree write. What cute/fun pictures you have here. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 12:01:00 PM

thanks so much Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/18/2025 4:03:00 AM

so very cute. stunning spring indeed. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 12:01:00 PM

thanks so much Thriveni:-) hugs Jan xx

Ink Empress

Date: 4/17/2025 1:28:00 PM

Dear Jan, This is so cute and i see through your vibrant and lively imagery so well articulated and painted in such a seamless manner, now that i see also your picture, its so adorable and goes so well with what you've delivered, it must be spring where you are at right now? I really love the lines "Golden daffodils and pretty tulips add colour after dull winter days" i can imagine they how they would do add color to grey days, and this etheree too adds color to the soul of readers! So warm! Thank you for joining, congratulations on your win! Sending you light always

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 12:00:00 PM

so much for my placement in your contest Ink:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/15/2025 3:31:00 PM

The striking imagery deserves to be caught on camera, Jan, or else have an artist paint it on canvas. It makes me want to leave the house and go for long walks in the countryside! ~ Hope all is bright in your side of the wood :) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 12:00:00 PM

thanks so much Paul, all is good with us, sending love to you and rhe family xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/11/2025 3:00:00 PM

I can see them gambolling and suckling and Spring is amazing!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 11:59:00 AM

Its so lovely to see Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2025 6:56:00 PM

Jan, a delightful spring poem. -hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 11:59:00 AM

thanks so much Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/9/2025 4:24:00 PM

Really well done Jan. You have a beautiful poem here. It's got a lot of sights, sounds, and smells we can identify with. Really lovely. Smiles!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Duke i love watching the little lambs in the fields:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/9/2025 3:35:00 PM

Spring has sprung and all is right with the world. I wish it were so, but your lines alleviated the gloom for a bit. Nicely written, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2025 11:58:00 AM

thanks Lin, t is a lovely time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/9/2025 2:31:00 PM

jan - you've captured all the beauty of spring in this lovely poem! i can't really see the lambs where i live, but i can still picture this perfectly...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2025 2:33:00 PM

Hi Ilene, I actively look for the new born lambs they are so gorgeous. we have lots of tulips and daffodils and hyacinth in bloom, it really is such an uplifting season! hugs Jan xx