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Stunning Spring

Trees wear a gown of bright emerald green Where birds are nesting in branches up high Parents shield fledglings so they can’t be seen Until they can spread their new wings and fly Daffodils dance in the warm zephyr breeze Bees buzz seeking out these pretty flowers Yellow pollen doesn't make the bees sneeze! They will pollinate blooms for many hours Young lambs gamboling around in the fields Birds fly high in the sky of azure blue I love the spring season where nature yields Our earth’s a stunning place for me and you Spring brings rejuvenation to our land The vibrant countryside looks very grand 14 lines 10 syllables per line Checked with how many syllables* Doesn't counted as 2 syllables Had previously been awarded 1st place in another contest and also POTD subsequently given n/a in Best sonnet contest Sponsored by Laura loo judged on 3/3/2018 9:36:00 AM Entered into POTD Contest Sponsored By Richard Lamoureux Poets Notes. I struggle to write sonnets I find the form extremely challenging so was delighted to get POTD in 2016 for this particular poem 08~19~16
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Haight Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 5:58 PM
Congratulations again for another win with the lovely poem, Jan, as well as your POTD honor! Such wonderful spring imagery! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Jan, I enjoyed your very refreshing spring sonnet. Congrats on your win. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 1:47 AM
This is a beautiful sonnet Jan. Congratulations on it getting POTD and also your winning this contest! xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Adding to the pedigree Jan. Congrats, hugs Rick. Thanks for entering my contest.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 7:28 AM
A spring poem blossoming! <3
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 10:55 PM
A wonderfully uplifting poem, Jan. Congrats on your win.
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 1:07 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Talbot Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Stunning sonnet Jan a fave for me too. Congratulations on your win!
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Thanks so much Mick:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:05 AM
This is beautiful, Jan. fave.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:08 AM
aww thanks Dale:-) I do surprise folks with a more serious poem but I tend to shy away from sonnets I leave those to the experts like in your poem lol:-) hugs jan xx
Raha Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 4:47 AM
this is so horrifically beautiful Jan,cherished each and every line.
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:33 AM
Thanks Miraj:-) hugs Jan xx
Ogundare Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:33 AM
This is lovely Jan!Thanks for reminding us of the beauty of spring.
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Sonnets, the poetry of love. This surely demonstrates the love which I share for spring. Let other poets witter on about the beautiful colours of autumn but for me there is joy in springtime's blooms.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 2:11 AM
I love the vibrancy and regeneration of spring but I adore autumn and its wonderful colours - winter is my least favourite season - dull grey cold days:-( hugs Jan xx
Lewis  Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Lovely write up :) I'm new to soup I hope you can stop by sometime x
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 7:46 PM
I will Gail:-) I think I've commented on your poems the avatar looks familiar:-) hugs jan xx
Canama Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 2:43 AM
A very inspiring spring sonnet. Congrats, Jan.
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Many thanks Estela :-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jan. Beautiful sonnet!
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Nusker Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Very well written. Loved the flow. Congratulations on your win, Jan.
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Thanks so much Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx
Bateman Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Hello Jan, Congratulations on POTD here!! This is a superbly-written sonnet. The diction and the tenor and power of the words you used in this particular write are marvelous!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Thanks so much Gary - I am not fond of the sonnet form but I've written 3 in about 10 days so I am getting more experienced writing them:-) hugs Jan xx
Daniel Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win, Jan:)
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
James Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Well done great win!
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Thanks so much James:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 25, 2016 at 11:24 PM
A very pretty, vivid picture of our beautiful surrounding nature - fantastic write Jan Mark
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Thanks so much my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Beautiful write Jan...Congrats on your win...
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 7:40 PM
Such a lovely spring Sonnet, Jan. Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the 'Sonnet' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Thanks so much Sandra I am not a great fan of sonnets so I'm dleighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx
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August 25, 2016 at 12:09 PM
I love that bees don't sneeze:)I suffer from allergies all the time!Excellent as always Jan!
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 1:10 PM
That's my favourite line Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Jan, congratulations on your beautiful piece and to find out it was a Poem of the Day WoW!! makes me feel part of it Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Thanks so much Eve I was stunned to get POTD and a first place win in the contest was the icing on the cake:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD Jan! Beautiful! 7 ; )
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Corbin Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Beautiful poem :)
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Thanks Cassie:-) I hope you will post some poems soon:-) hugs Jan xx
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