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STUMBLE

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ chocolates half-eaten~ your socks still on the nightstand where love first stumbled
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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Good one, Sara ~
George Avatar
February 13, 2026 at 12:17 AM
The sweet rhythm of life gets upset when love falters. A very meaningful senryu.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 6:04 PM
thank you, dear Valsa. hugs, Sara
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2026 at 9:01 PM
Hmm. Gotta find the right theme music for this darkly haunting setting...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 6:04 PM
thanks for visiting and commenting, Gershon....I suppose this is a bit haunting....good luck finding the right music :-)
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