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Stuffing Darkness

She moved carefully into the light bulbs Didn’t want to stumble into the gloom The shamans looked on speculatively Unable to raise in the silence Another dark and brilliant spot Strange in the rolling velvety space Played at the far end of the odd feeling She went deeper into nothing but an unlocked someplace else ahead after either

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Date: 11/2/2024 6:18:00 AM
Hmmm... This one is intriguing but hard to decipher. Maybe that's the point?
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Mary Evans
Date: 11/2/2024 11:14:00 AM
Yes sir, I like to have the reader thinking they need to read it again that maybe they missed something! I just like the meshing of the words thrown together at the end. Kind of a thought that fell apart.

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