Stuff the 'Dying with Dignity' Act

   Stars go out with a bang
     A candle's flame's intense
       the moment before it's extinguished

   And so, too, Buckingham Fountain*
     springs up like a geyser
       just before it's tucked in bed for the night

   That's how I want to go
     gathering my strength
       and exploding into
          a thousand glittering pieces



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   *Buckingham Fountain in Chicago is one of the
     world's largest fountains. It streams water up
     to 150 feet (~ 46 meters) high.
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Rhymer Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Me too Mr. Wolf.I want to ride out on the crest of a wave if I must go wearing red cow girl boots.Not laying prone on my belly lamely paddling about in the shallows awaiting the unwelcome and unwanted visitor .
Hawkins Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 3:18 AM
Go in a blaze of brilliance.... Wonderful.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 10:03 AM
Very very good poem.
Greenhough Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Yes, best is to go still aware. I liked the visuals of the candle and geyser. Thank you0
Brotherton Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 2:40 PM
I agree Gershon. A wonderful poem my friend.
Gentile Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 4:08 AM
Hope it's not for a long time GW!! You know you're irreplaceable!! Happy Weekend!!
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 12:06 AM
Great imagery and ideas to drive home your message. Not everyone is strong enough to die with a bang. Some who wither within illness may beg to differ. When I go I hope to not cause those around me more pain. But death is likely painful for all no matter the method time or circumstances. Great poem Gershon!
Seeker Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 9:50 PM
a fair enough desire, gw :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 8:59 PM
Going out with a bang, never to be forgotten Tom
Lawless Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 8:44 PM
damn Gershon, most are dying for dignity....
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