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Stuff the 'Dying with Dignity' Act

Stars go out with a bang A candle's flame's intense the moment before it's extinguished And so, too, Buckingham Fountain* springs up like a geyser just before it's tucked in bed for the night That's how I want to go gathering my strength and exploding into a thousand glittering pieces _____________________________________ *Buckingham Fountain in Chicago is one of the world's largest fountains. It streams water up to 150 feet (~ 46 meters) high.

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Date: 12/17/2023 4:09:00 PM
Me too Mr. Wolf.I want to ride out on the crest of a wave if I must go wearing red cow girl boots.Not laying prone on my belly lamely paddling about in the shallows awaiting the unwelcome and unwanted visitor .
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Date: 12/17/2023 3:18:00 AM
Go in a blaze of brilliance.... Wonderful.
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Date: 12/16/2023 10:03:00 AM
Very very good poem.
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Date: 12/15/2023 6:02:00 PM
Yes, best is to go still aware. I liked the visuals of the candle and geyser. Thank you0
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Date: 12/15/2023 2:40:00 PM
I agree Gershon. A wonderful poem my friend.
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Date: 12/15/2023 5:34:00 AM
absolutely stunning, Gershon. I love the imagery and the metaphorical reference to Buckingham Fountain. The last verse touched me...a glorious way to go. My grandmother said that she wanted to 'pass quietly in her sleep.' She lead an adventurous but gentle life so her wishes were fulfilled. She died in her sleep with her Bible in her lap. have a great day, Sara
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Date: 12/15/2023 4:08:00 AM
Hope it's not for a long time GW!! You know you're irreplaceable!! Happy Weekend!!
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Date: 12/15/2023 12:06:00 AM
Great imagery and ideas to drive home your message. Not everyone is strong enough to die with a bang. Some who wither within illness may beg to differ. When I go I hope to not cause those around me more pain. But death is likely painful for all no matter the method time or circumstances. Great poem Gershon!
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Date: 12/14/2023 9:50:00 PM
a fair enough desire, gw :)
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Date: 12/14/2023 8:59:00 PM
Going out with a bang, never to be forgotten Tom
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Date: 12/14/2023 8:44:00 PM
damn Gershon, most are dying for dignity....
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