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Stuck Up

I can’t take your wining Or you’re crying and fussing I’m dead beat of your selfish moves And the acts you seem to “prove” I can’t take your hypocrite act A fraud in fact And lets discuss about your medieval plots The devil shots You scrap You nag You pick this fight You brawl your might But No, it’s not your fault She too fought She too nagged And she went mad For your wellbeing End being The stacked up Snob Pretending as though this a job Prevent the spear of the grass The puffs of the clouding gas The shower of your sweat spills And just chill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/13/2009 4:38:00 AM
ouch! godd therapeutic poem! Saidah, Jim
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Date: 6/8/2009 11:04:00 AM
Awesome! I LOVE This. Could Throw A Few Name To This. Keep It Up!
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Date: 6/6/2009 1:25:00 PM
Great descriptions. Love the third stanza. -Alley
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:29:00 AM
Interesting piece with lovely imageries. You are such a great poet. Keep your poetry pens dancing to the drum beat of your dreams… great you! Leke
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Date: 5/29/2009 4:02:00 AM
Thjat last line says it all. she sounds like she could use a good ole chill-pill. :) a great way of writing out a snob - as you said, it will end being. right on, man. love, Kristin
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