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Stuck On the Subway

A sudden stop, the engines shut
As folks glance up from reading.
Some shrug, some cluck and others (me!)
Have faces pinched and pleading.

A minute passes, maybe two,
But then there’s an announcement:
“A passenger is sick, so we
Are stuck,” is the pronouncement.

I take a breath and try my best
To read my magazine
And block the fact I’m in a tunnel,
Trapped and in-between.

Beside me is a six year old,
His first time on a train,
With unrelenting questions
Which could drive a soul insane.

His presence is a godsend, though,
A wonderful distraction,
Allowing me to settle down
And fake a calm reaction.

At last, the motor rumbles on
And life is back on track,
Preventing what I dreaded – 
An anxiety attack.

I wonder, though, about the rider
Whom they said was sick;
My heart’s still drumming
But that guy’s recovery was quick!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/21/2015 1:14:00 AM
Ilene, you are the Jerry Seinfeld of poetry, and I mean that as a great compliment! You have such a way of taking the everyday occurrences in life, making them interesting, intriguing or funny...I love your wit...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/20/2015 10:01:00 PM
Geez, stay calm. If everybody starts to lose it, you're going to have a chaotic mess on your hands. :) Glad that things got back on track and your hearts back in your chest. When things like this go so a miss, staying calm is always best. Have a nice open airy weekend ilene. Peace. :)
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