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Stuck In the Muck

Spring is here and temperatures rise Sludged path—tanks go to their demise And with the realization of risk An army marched so sure and brisk Nature wins, not a soldier’s surprise

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/3/2022 7:25:00 AM

Nature always has the last word, look what happened to Napoleon and Hitler, nature froze their armies. Well written Anaya, Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/3/2022 8:59:00 AM

I am honored, thank you, Robert. The Russians retreated into the interior, deep in winter, leading French troops to a frozen death.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2022 8:26:00 PM

Sure hope this one goes through. I still can't get a comment to go through on doggy limerick. This was great poem. Ok, let's see if THIS one sticks.

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/14/2022 6:50:00 PM

Andrea, sorry I am giving you so much technical anxiety! I may run tribute to R.G. through again...see what happens, hate to lose comments from dear ones! Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2022 8:26:00 PM

Hurrah. I guess there is some glitch for me commenting to your more recent poetry!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/14/2022 6:52:00 PM

Running it through again, I thank you for trying!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/13/2022 1:11:00 PM

I hope Spring flourishes and this war will die. Nice Quintilla. Hope where ever you are you are safe. :)Paulette

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/13/2022 3:02:00 PM

Hoping the same Paulette, please take care!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/10/2022 11:01:00 AM

I shall never forget the 101st living in mud four days in Germany because their transport could not take flight until a U-2 could take flight! Imagine all those Ukrainians enduring the snow so they can throw bottles at the Russians! Aloha!

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/10/2022 12:27:00 PM

I watch with pent-up frustration, Rico! May the poets write with fury about the invasion. Aloha!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/9/2022 5:42:00 PM

We can all hope, I Am Anaya. Mother Nature has a way of getting her way.

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/9/2022 6:28:00 PM

I know that nature is on our side this time. Thank you for your kind visit, always welcome here!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/9/2022 1:19:00 PM

Fine piece Anaya, taking us to look into spring. Nice one!

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/9/2022 4:04:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon, if I may...This one is about how (winter)'s snow slush can help defeat the bad guys when tanks get stuck. I am praying. Visit anytime!