Stuck In the Middle

Heaven’s above, Hell’s below,
Purgatory’s in the middle, 
Guess what’s on the menu,
Our souls! To solve my riddle.

Players in the mix together, 
Yes actors and entire cast,
Props and stars of their show, 
Entertaining up to the last. 

Gods and demons, decide
our comeuppance and fate,
Tomorrow’s judgement day,
Our life, is up for debate,

Watching over our theatrics,
Deliberating all mankind, 
If a hung jury, will cast us back, 
into the nether, nowhere time.

Born a Roman Catholic, was 
indoctrinated this spiel, in school,
Beaten and punished harshly, 
if not acceding to their rules. 

That’s why I’m sceptical, about
organised religion, and it’s truth,
Why use corporal punishment, 
unless dishing out bad fruit.  

You’ll find cynical sentiment, 
in some, if not many of my poems,
I’m not trying to influence, 
That’s for you, and you alone. 

I apologize to others, if offended,
I’m not trying, to tempt blind faith,
My message is, don’t be duped,
by con-artists, before it’s all too late. 

Question everything, without exception,
What’s the harm, if nothing’s to hide,
Meet your creators, gaze upon them,
Project ones honesty, onto Gods eyes.

Now find I’m stuck in the middle,
Agnostic, my penchant is science,
How else, could I have turned out,
Chose my own path over forced compliance. 

By
David Kavanagh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/26/2020 2:01:00 AM
It’s a brutal experience Christopher being schooled with a cane across your behind or fingertips on a cold morning your dad was right sometimes I thought they were just beating us for fun
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/27/2020 6:24:00 PM
Your own personal jesus Someone to hear your prayers Someone who care Reach out and touch faith Pick up the receiver I'll make you a believer In order to fleece Ya
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David Kavanagh
Date: 6/27/2020 6:21:00 AM
I think some people are genuinely brainwashed but others want to be a personal Jesus and make a fortune in his name, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/26/2020 1:56:00 PM
On reflection David given it's credo it sure does seem to appeal to or draw in or attract a certain type of character's with certain debatable traits and attributes as employees
Date: 6/26/2020 1:55:00 AM
Hi Christopher I genuinely know some good decent people in the mix that practice religion in a peaceful casual manner, my apology is to them for I’m only trying to highlight the extremist view and how it backfired on them, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/26/2020 1:59:00 PM
Good and Bad in everyone and everything. A reason we should choose individuals over and rather than group's of people
Date: 6/25/2020 5:53:00 PM
Yeah clarifies or clears things up a bit David. My dad also went to a catholic school used to say he thought the reason you went to school was to get smacked or hit by the teachers. I went to school in S.A we used to get canned good and proper styley. I still have scars on my bum and back used to tick them off and mark them off on our school tie
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/25/2020 6:09:00 PM
Sad you feel the need to appologies for having the gaul to have a differing point of view for fear of offending David. Tolerance ????
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