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- Stuck In a Snowglobe With You -

In a moment of silence
The winter's crystals are filled
in a snowglobe with you

A window without curtains
Like two sparrows in the country of love
We escape from problems in line
and money that burns

To get away from Christmas and stress
This is one of the most magical places on earth
So close, cheek to cheek

We sit on this branch and shine
in our common air and landscape
Christmas is time for peace,
love and reflection

Take care of those around you
Christmas is a period of the year
it's hardest to be lonely







04.12.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes it is hard to be alone on Christmas Day. Yet many people send Christmas alone. Sad but true. have a nice day my friend.
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January 11, 2019 at 8:53 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I like tvist your site. i enjoy your poetry.
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:57 AM
- Many thanks Darlene, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 7:34 AM
I cannot resist passing this pretty pink contagious smiley face without saying hello. Togetherness with a loved one beats everything else in this world. Be blessed dear friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 4:57 AM
- Many thanks Jennifer, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 11:52 PM
Nicely done, Sunshine, :) A fresh new year with hopes and blessing to appear. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 12:01 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, dear Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Joyce Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 3:07 PM
very clever and inventive poem..loved it ..merry christmas from the u.s.
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 12:29 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and friendly Christmas greetings, Jim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent write from your pen. Your words do gently take one within the snowglobe and such joy is felt when reading. I love the heartfelt feelings, the whole content of this piece. I love Christmas. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Christmas season. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 12:28 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and friendly Christmas greetings, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Beautiful Anne-Lise Good luck in the contest :) hugs...Charlie
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 3:17 AM
- Many thanks Charlie, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Anne-Lise, this poem is so beautifully penned and I love it, best of luck in the contest, well done !
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Many thanks for lovely comment, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Anne-Lise, this poem is so beautifully penned and I love it, best of luck in the contest, well done !
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:38 PM
:)
May Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 3:36 PM
I really felt I was in that snow globe, really great poem my new friend!
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:33 PM
- Thank you, Bobby (always nice with new friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 1:54 AM
Excellent imagery created for this lovely poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:46 AM
- Many thanks Ravi, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 6:30 AM
And yet, there are some who refuse to enjoy it. The sharing's more fun though. Well penned.
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:47 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 12:09 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, It seems climate is changing due to global warming - last Christmas we went to the Kruger Park and it was sweltering at 40 degrees, but we got back to Johannesburg and it dropped to 23 degrees. I love Christmas and love visiting London at Christmas, one year we escaped from our relations for a long week end in Scotland - so peaceful, and serene. However in Johannesburg we also get 4 seasons in one day also. Best regards, Jennifer
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:47 AM
- Many thanks Jennifer, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Wow, This is so unique Anne-Lise, so positive, love it...
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:45 AM
- Many thanks Harry, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Christmas is for sharing, Anne-Lise; sharing brings joy, love and a feel-good feeling that lasts a long time. I love your uplifting poem! I hope lonely people, especially the elderly, will receive a lovely surprise visit on Christmas day! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:45 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:46 AM
What a lovely image you created for this lovely poem Anne- Lise xxoo
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:44 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Very Nice Anne-lise. :)
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:44 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:06 AM
Lovely write Anne-Lise...your writing always shines with a Sunshine smile...ready for a big win!..love & light...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:43 AM
- Many thanks W.W., for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leffanta Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Great concept and delivery, but from what I see on AFV, Christmas is best spent alone rather than among ungrateful family and friends! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 12:43 AM
- Many thanks Rico, for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Lovely verse Sunshine, how sad that many will spend Christmas alone. Good luck. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:49 AM
- Tom, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 3:52 PM
I hear the message of love and family..splendid ending stanza, Anne-Lise. My very best to you for a win.
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:48 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 3:35 PM
A tender message of caring and love wrapped within the magic of Christmas by your artful pen dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Good luck!
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:48 AM
- Many thanks Demetrios, for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Beautifully done my friend and the final stanza says it all.
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 11:47 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 2:41 PM
that's the way i love the true essence of christmas... i am moved, anne... you are a greeat poet... keep the love glowing and happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 1:56 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Absolutely charming Anne-Lise -I especially love the second stanza but the final stanza hits home hard as its not a happy time for many:-( adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 1:55 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, comment and a fave, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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