Strut of the Hollow Ritual

Listening to the mridanga's beat,
the kartal's clappings
rows of cars by the roadside -
invitees poised to enter the mandop
to offer money to the palla
and front row guests.

Now a days,
elaborate rituals in religious  ceremonies
introduced by the rich and corrupt
not found in our culture and tradition.

Fear stirs deep
in my unhabituated mind.
These are places of strut,
where true grace is left behind -
a stage for wealth,
for pride and display:
no meaning, no beauty,
but hollow show that grips simple hearts.

The poor ape the rich,
sell land or borrow deep,
strangled by debt's coil they can't leap.

What rises today ?
No portrait pure and right,
but dwindling immoral society's blight.

A strut filled society,
where the native soul lies buried,
overthrown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 4:13 AM
Well, it used to be called trying to be like the Jones. In other words, living beyond one's means barely getting by when it is not necessary to survive. We watch TV and think that the programs and movies are supposed to be like the common household and most of like upper middle class or higher. The sets look like a picture on the front of decorating magazine when life is not like that at all. We have to live on what income we have to get by. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Jones Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 1:04 AM
“The poor ape the rich, sell land or borrow deep, strangled by debt's coil they can't leap.” Love these lines as they are eloquently staying an issue I understand too well. Great job with this poem!
Singh Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 12:47 AM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 10:13 PM
That's so sad. It is happening worldwide. So much corruption in this world. Well done
Singh Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 12:47 AM
Thank you
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