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Contest: Funny Summer Limerick

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

2 August 2024

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Strut

On the beach, a cute girl I passed by
I decided I must catch her eye
I tripped on a rock
Went face down in shock
And I wished I could curl up and die

beachgirlhumorouslimerick

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Terry Miller

August 22, 2024 at 1:50 AM

Good one! congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

August 19, 2024 at 1:55 PM

Yes that is embarrassing. I have seen it happen to people. Always it's. Guy. Haha. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 2:08 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Hope this did Not happen to you. What a story in 5 lines..... Have a fun day writing away....................

Terry Flood

August 18, 2024 at 2:12 PM

Thanks, Paula. Glad you enjoyed. Entirely fictional… thankfully.

Tania Kitchin

August 18, 2024 at 9:52 AM

Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your hilarious limerick.

Terry Flood

August 18, 2024 at 2:11 PM

Thank you, Tania and thanks for my placement

Nette Onclaud

August 2, 2024 at 5:46 PM

Lol, accidents like this take their darn toll...very nice, Terry!

Terry Flood

August 11, 2024 at 2:49 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Nette. Thanks

Gershon Wolf

August 2, 2024 at 2:18 PM

Ha, ha! I once challenged my younger sister to a 50 meter sprint. As I looked over my shoulder to see how much I had beaten her by, I tripped over a rock myself, and wound up in a cast with a broken ankle for six weeks. ~ Mr. Hero

Terry Flood

August 2, 2024 at 2:22 PM

Ouch… I think I’d rather have the dented pride ;-)