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Contest: Funny Summer Limerick

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

2 August 2024

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On the beach, a cute girl I passed by I decided I must catch her eye I tripped on a rock Went face down in shock And I wished I could curl up and die

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Terry Miller

Date: 8/22/2024 1:50:00 AM

Good one! congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 1:55:00 PM

Yes that is embarrassing. I have seen it happen to people. Always it's. Guy. Haha. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Hope this did Not happen to you. What a story in 5 lines..... Have a fun day writing away....................

Terry Flood
Date: 8/18/2024 2:12:00 PM

Thanks, Paula. Glad you enjoyed. Entirely fictional… thankfully.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 9:52:00 AM

Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your hilarious limerick.

Terry Flood
Date: 8/18/2024 2:11:00 PM

Thank you, Tania and thanks for my placement

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2024 5:46:00 PM

Lol, accidents like this take their darn toll...very nice, Terry!

Terry Flood
Date: 8/11/2024 2:49:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Nette. Thanks

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/2/2024 2:18:00 PM

Ha, ha! I once challenged my younger sister to a 50 meter sprint. As I looked over my shoulder to see how much I had beaten her by, I tripped over a rock myself, and wound up in a cast with a broken ankle for six weeks. ~ Mr. Hero

Terry Flood
Date: 8/2/2024 2:22:00 PM

Ouch… I think I’d rather have the dented pride ;-)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/2/2024 2:10:00 PM

ha! well done, terry! good luck in the contest...

Terry Flood
Date: 8/2/2024 2:29:00 PM

Thanks, Ilene. Must try writing a few more limericks… might awaken my muse ;-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2024 1:15:00 PM

Lol, you're not alone there Terry, we've all done it. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Terry Flood
Date: 8/2/2024 2:30:00 PM

A fictional write but the very thought of it makes me cringe ;-)