Struggles Decided Who I Am

"Every struggle in my life has been a lesson and made me stronger." 
                                                                     by Constance La France
 

                        struggles, integral part of human life..
                         I had my share of battle! Am I sad 
                  because I did? No. struggles made me stronger
                        each time I encountered it on my path. 
                      my mirror? pristine clear water of a lake...
                      couldn't recognize my own decisive face. 

                            experienced surge of determination 
                        in my heart, whenever faced an obstacle.
                    my steps were resolute, I walked forward. when
                               a feeling of miserable emptiness 
                          enveloped me, when I felt imprisoned 
                           in a cage with no window to escape,

                      flowers didn't bloom in my delightful garden
                            mellifluous Koel didn't sing the song
                           she does...I felt breathless...I decided
                                to find the key to emancipation
                            a candle burns to illuminate a space, 
                           to spread the aroma to our existence,

                          painted future with opalescent colours 
                      of the sky, borrowed pleasing fragrance from 
                           ambrosial Jasmine, tall shadowy trees 
                           gave me shade, aquamarine waterfalls 
                      descending from steep mountain-tops, released 
                             in me the harmonious rhythm of life.

                                       no shackles can bind you
                                     when you decide to be free!


                                        December 18, 2022
                                       Theme: Introspection
                        Writing Challenge - V Forms Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Constance La France
                                   syllables checked by HMS.com
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Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 2:13 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Thank you, Dear Sara. Really appreciate your inspiring comment. Love ~ Mala
La France Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Mala, wonderful Verse poem, I like it very much. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Dear Constance. Your writing challenges are unique - I love to participate. Hugs ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 8:53 PM
"flowers didn't bloom in my delightful garden mellifluous Koel didn't sing the song", "no shackles can bind you when you decide to be free!" - Very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Christuraj! Your comments inspire me.
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