Struggle

I find sometimes my life is a struggle fighting demons embracing beauty enchanting and rare... All it takes is a second and your life is turned upside down... In my youth I never received much encouragement from my father I learned to move out of spite... But for you my love I want to struggle against your restraints I want you to lose control I want to lose control... Force is not a dirty word... ~ ~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2014 9:34:00 PM

this is very interesting one. I think your childhood , though perhaps difficult, has molded you into someone with extraordinary character.

Ken Carroll
Date: 4/19/2014 9:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Tamara Robinson

Date: 4/17/2014 10:23:00 PM

Ken Carroll
Date: 4/17/2014 10:27:00 PM

Thank you Tamara for perusing my poems!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/17/2014 6:30:00 PM

No, it certainly isn't. LOVELY piece. I'm sad to read about your relationship with your father, Ken. We all have struggles...in different areas...Some struggles, as you mentioned, are just sweet!

Ken Carroll
Date: 4/17/2014 10:26:00 PM

Thank you Eileen for a lovlely visit!